From: Christoph Hellwig Date: Thu, 30 Jun 2022 16:18:00 +0000 (+0200) Subject: more nits X-Git-Tag: draft-hellwig-nfsv4-scsi-layout-nvme-03~9 X-Git-Url: https://www.infradead.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=3fa14cbafa5c0241062e4cccc80db1f86d2dd739;p=users%2Fhch%2Fscsi-layout-nvme.git more nits From Sorin Faibish --- diff --git a/scsi_nvme_middle.xml b/scsi_nvme_middle.xml index 76f964d..a7a5454 100644 --- a/scsi_nvme_middle.xml +++ b/scsi_nvme_middle.xml @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ This document does not amend the pNFS SCSI layout document, but - instead of explains how to map the SCSI constructs used in + instead explains how to map the SCSI constructs used in the pNFS SCSI layout document to NVMe concepts. @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ Before returning a PNFS_SCSI_VOLUME_BASE volume to the client, the MDS needs to prepare the volume for fencing using PRs. This is done by registering the reservation generated for the MDS with the device (see - followed by a Reservation Acquire + ) followed by a Reservation Acquire command (refer to Section 7.2 of ) with the Reservation Acquire Action (RACQA) field set to 000b (i.e., Acquire) and the Reservation Type (RTYPE) field set to 4h (i.e., Exclusive Access @@ -197,8 +197,8 @@
- If a NVMe command issued by the client to the storage device returns a - non-retryable error (refer to the DNR bit defined in Figure 92 in + If an NVMe command issued by the client to the storage device returns + a non-retryable error (refer to the DNR bit defined in Figure 92 in ), the client MUST commit all layouts that use the storage device through the MDS, return all outstanding layouts for the device, forget the device ID, and unregister the reservation