From: Christoph Hellwig <hch@lst.de>
Date: Fri, 10 Mar 2023 16:32:38 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: improve the SCSI Layout mapping to NVMe
X-Git-Tag: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-nvme-02~5
X-Git-Url: https://www.infradead.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=21b7b625a5e464e0e8c680137919b0787d786863;p=users%2Fhch%2Fscsi-layout-nvme.git

improve the SCSI Layout mapping to NVMe

Based on suggestions from David Noveck and David Black
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diff --git a/scsi_nvme_middle.xml b/scsi_nvme_middle.xml
index 085ff70..6354c8e 100644
--- a/scsi_nvme_middle.xml
+++ b/scsi_nvme_middle.xml
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@
 
 <section anchor='sec:slm' title='SCSI Layout mapping to NVMe'>
   <t>
-    The SCSI layout definition <xref target="RFC8154" /> only references
-    few SCSI specific concepts directly.  This document provides a mapping
-    from these SCSI concepts to NVM Express concepts that SHOULD be used
+    The SCSI layout definition <xref target="RFC8154" /> references only a
+    few SCSI-specific concepts directly.  This document provides a mapping
+    from these SCSI concepts to NVM Express concepts that are used
     when using the pNFS SCSI layout with NVMe namespaces.
   </t>