From: Christoph Hellwig Date: Thu, 31 Aug 2023 09:24:05 +0000 (+0200) Subject: typo fixes X-Git-Tag: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-nvme-04 X-Git-Url: https://www.infradead.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=1b82540eeebf4556ee9ed7d0e4f59e14585b3c3c;p=users%2Fhch%2Fscsi-layout-nvme.git typo fixes --- diff --git a/Makefile b/Makefile index d16c62d..cf99339 100755 --- a/Makefile +++ b/Makefile @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ # Copyright (C) The IETF Trust (2014) # -DOCNAME=draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-nvme-03 +DOCNAME=draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-nvme-04 FILE=scsi-nvme -PREVVERS=01 -VERS=02 +PREVVERS=03 +VERS=04 YEAR=`date +%Y` MONTH=`date +%m` diff --git a/scsi-nvme.md b/scsi-nvme.md index 71b2ea6..1a2a1a3 100644 --- a/scsi-nvme.md +++ b/scsi-nvme.md @@ -96,14 +96,14 @@ protocol family. NFSv4.1 (in {{RFC8881}}) includes a pNFS feature that allows reads and writes to be performed by other means than directing read and -write operations to the server. Through use of this feature. The server, +write operations to the server. Through use of this feature, the server, in the role of metadata server is responsible for managing file and directory metadata while separate means are provided for execution of reads and writes. -These other means of performing file read and writes are defined by +These other means of performing file reads and writes are defined by individual mapping types which often have their own specifications. The -SCSI Layout Type, defined in RFC8154, describes how IO is to be done +SCSI Layout Type, defined in RFC8154, describes how I/O is to be done directly to block storage devices. The pNFS Small Computer System Interface (SCSI) layout {{RFC8154}} is a layout type @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ NVMe namespaces as storage devices for the pNFS SCSI layout. ### PRs - Key Registration {#ssc:fencing:keys} -On NVMe namespaces, reservations keys are registered using the +On NVMe namespaces, reservation keys are registered using the Reservation Register command (refer to Section 7.3 of {{NVME-BASE}}) with the Reservation Register Action (RREGA) field set to 000b (i.e., Register Reservation Key) and