improve the SCSI Layout mapping to NVMe

Based on suggestions from David Noveck and David Black

diff --git a/scsi_nvme_middle.xml b/scsi_nvme_middle.xml
index 085ff70e444460afdf8fd38a58c3f51bac7427e0..6354c8e1769e3daf8e1425b57fbcb0c72622038a 100644 (file)
--- a/scsi_nvme_middle.xml
+++ b/scsi_nvme_middle.xml
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@
 
 <section anchor='sec:slm' title='SCSI Layout mapping to NVMe'>
   <t>
-    The SCSI layout definition <xref target="RFC8154" /> only references
-    few SCSI specific concepts directly.  This document provides a mapping
-    from these SCSI concepts to NVM Express concepts that SHOULD be used
+    The SCSI layout definition <xref target="RFC8154" /> references only a
+    few SCSI-specific concepts directly.  This document provides a mapping
+    from these SCSI concepts to NVM Express concepts that are used
     when using the pNFS SCSI layout with NVMe namespaces.
   </t>