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hwmon: (f71882fg) Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation
authorAbhinav Saxena <xandfury@gmail.com>
Thu, 7 Nov 2024 01:38:49 +0000 (18:38 -0700)
committerGuenter Roeck <linux@roeck-us.net>
Tue, 12 Nov 2024 21:54:55 +0000 (13:54 -0800)
commit2e5bdf8aa2f49d06200fb6e645673c819135b614
tree840dd2e44a97e038e434d9bff79c0c790e4e9967
parent2fc032ec1de485c64d8561dc7fa0de3f7acf147d
hwmon: (f71882fg) Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation

Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation:
- Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with
 clearer "that specify the percentage at which"
- Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct
 verb agreement and adjective form
- Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the
 complex explanation into simpler parts
- Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability
- Remove redundant "at" in temperature description

No functional changes, documentation only.

Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@gmail.com>
Message-ID: <20241107013849.47833-1-xandfury@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Guenter Roeck <linux@roeck-us.net>
Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst